critique please

11/06/2018 13:01
i can't draw fly cycles
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B1uMoonGirl 11/30/2018 17:26
I cant do fly cycles either, and I guess this applies to me to:
1. I have nothing to say about the wings, they are a m a z i n g
2. (this is what applies to me) I can see that you spent time on this, ( honestly please dont be offended, im afraid I will offend you) but just, idk, make the tail a ᵇᶦᵗ more smooth. -Also make the drawing a bit mre smooth in general...
You have the movement doen great and I really love this toon.
B1uMoonGirl 11/30/2018 17:19
WalkingStupid, sushiboi, woa thats like advertizing AND spamming bc theres so many :/
(the " :/ " dont apply to you, Sushiboi)
sushiboi 11/07/2018 09:59
WalkingStupid, don't advertise
WalkingStupid 11/07/2018 08:53
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Amorthlen 11/06/2018 18:19
hmmm... where did the back leg go for a few frames?
sushiboi 11/06/2018 17:15
Flingoro, SacredZeraora, DaleksOfSkaro, thank you!!! i'll definitely use your advice ^^
Flingoro 11/06/2018 17:02
this is amazing but i'd put more motion in the tail bc it looks really stiff..
SacredZeraora 11/06/2018 13:04
its really good though
DaleksOfSkaro 11/06/2018 13:04
Bodies fly up with updraft, so the spine will curl as it goes up, the tail will go down as a counter balance, the head is fine, but the legs should stay facing the back, for them to move like that would hinder speed and mobility. Otherwise this is well drawn.