Redo

07/15/2018 19:30
The original was a toon from a year ago. It had a flame war on it because people got triggered I was passer. Now, do you think improvement?

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Flare-Aamon 07/31/2018 06:17
Talia8Pie 07/30/2018 23:28
Flare-Aamon >:T Next time you post its a medal
Seacorals 07/19/2018 02:50
Talia8Pie, np! I'm bad at walking cycles ;p
Talia8Pie 07/16/2018 20:39
ShineX-Daydream, Seacorals, JillAndJack, DaleksOfSkaro, FG_FatalHydra, Thank you for the advice, i'll take it when I do another run cycle. (im terrible at them ahaha)
Seacorals 07/16/2018 12:23
Seacorals, here is what i mean :3
Seacorals 07/16/2018 12:16
you certainly hav e improved <3
just a tip!
the legs look a bit awkward, since this is a very thin animal the legs should interwine under its belly before shooting out again ^^ this i feel is how a super fat animal would run :''3c
__FusH__ 07/16/2018 10:46
JillAndJack, he got banned ;w;
JillAndJack 07/16/2018 10:42
__FusH__, pngn left? thank god he reminded me of my conservative classmate
__FusH__ 07/16/2018 04:16
Massive improvement
I wonder how pngn would react to this now if he was still here.
ShineX-Daydream 07/16/2018 01:44
woah nice!
A little advice though:
In future, make the front paws go further back though. When running like this, the back touch or even go over the front legs for just a moment, like in this draft:
http://toonator.com/draft/ixj4shinefpu

Again, massive improvement! I'm proud of you and just trying to help you to go even further and make even better toons~!