so, im writing a song

02/10/2020 13:57
for some one i like... love and ummmm, i need help. HELPFULL critique is wanted and i need to know if i should use my keyboard or guitar for the back ground music. the lerics are gona be in the comments
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-__-__-__-__-__- 02/14/2020 09:31
gueswhatimafurry, this is such a cool song!! ok this might sound weird but ive always liked the idea of making a song i actually made a few, but like really short and bad, but this is just so good!!!!! if i knew the tune i would know whether to use keyboard or guitar but i say use the one you will be best at x
gueswhatimafurry 02/12/2020 19:16
Void-Stars, my voice sucks... i recorded a bad recording of one of the songs. ill share them when they all done
Void-Stars 02/12/2020 19:15
that was beautiful, i would like to hear u sing it.
VoidWatcher 02/10/2020 14:06
ooh you even got the main lyrics for interevals.
gueswhatimafurry 02/10/2020 13:57
yes i know
that i have never seen you
or met you
but my feeling are growing twards you
they have grown so much
that i can't ignore them

don't you say
that you can't
feel the same way
just because you think
can't feel the love
but you just don't realise
that its up to you to feel love

even if im not the one
i don't want to make anything awkward
but just listen to your self when you say

"you don't want me tho"
"I've opened my heart
to so many people
that weren't right for me
and ended up making myself
numb to love"

don't you say
that you can't
feel the same way
just so you don't get hurt
i felt that way
but look at me
im fine now
you can only get hurt
if you let them hurt you

even if im not the one
i don't want to make anything awkward
but just listen to your self when you say

"you don't want me tho"
"I've opened my heart
to so many people
that weren't right for me
and ended up making myself
numb to love"

even if im not the one
even if i die
even if im not the one
even if
even if

i don't want you tho
you've opened my heart
to so many people
that weren't right for you
and ended up making yourself
numb to love

even if that is true
even if i never get to meet you
even if i die
even if im not the one
even if...

"you don't want me tho"
"I've opened my heart
to so many people
that weren't right for me
and ended up making myself
numb to love"
numb to love
numb to love