Here are your critiques, JayCanDraw:
Whelp I did what I can .^. TBH you actually helped me improve! You helped me keep wings a consistent size and fold them correctly. Most differences are merely in body movement, and that's a daugnting task (that's why I did a frame). I think with just some more practice you'll be a pro! ANYWHO here ya go...?
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