Turnabout sisters Pt 3

12/06/2017 13:50
after mias body was found phoenix tries to talk to maya, then someone starts screaming out side, and phoenix finds something not good! ( IM SO SORRY IF THERE ARE ANY SPELLING PROBLEMS! im pressed on time) pm me if u have any questions

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JayCanDraw 12/06/2017 16:42
-ToxicAlleyCat--, hahah lol idk, makes it more fun
-ToxicAlleyCat-- 12/06/2017 16:02
WHY CLIFFHANGERS WHYYYY
RANDOMGIRL4 12/06/2017 15:33
JayCanDraw 12/06/2017 15:04
RANDOMGIRL4, lol i will probably do a few more
RANDOMGIRL4 12/06/2017 14:56
KNEEED MOREE
JayCanDraw 12/06/2017 14:07
NinaTheSkeleton_, yah i notice it goes by fast but if u have to, just pause it ^^
NinaTheSkeleton_ 12/06/2017 14:06
JayCanDraw, i would make the dialog i bit more longer, and make the girl say a few words then faint
JayCanDraw 12/06/2017 14:01
canadian-leaf205 12/06/2017 14:00
AAAAA ANOTHER CLIFF HANGERRRRRRR
JayCanDraw 12/06/2017 13:57
justsombody, maya was the girl who blacked out...her name was on the note, mayas sister is the dead one