shake it off (raw)

12/05/2017 02:00
Suggestions and constructive comments please I need help. Will clean up/refine later (probably)
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Filthy_Casual 12/07/2017 15:04
TheDerpyKitten, nono its all very good criticism :)
Thanks a ton!
TheDerpyKitten 12/07/2017 13:23
I know you said its a rough animation but when you finish it up, I think it should be a little more smooth? Wonwerater said, the tail animation looks a little choppy and yea, the head could use a little help but overall this looks good so far

(this probably didn't help, sorry .-.)
Wonwerater 12/06/2017 21:16
Filthy_Casual 12/06/2017 21:15
Wonwerater, thanks!
Wonwerater 12/06/2017 17:55
When the wolf shakes his/hers head, it should be a bit more turning
like from side to side. here, you only got it turning one side and then back

And also, the tail should kinda wave smoothly when the head does, the thing you got here is kinda stoping quickly when the tail is down, try to make idk... ughhhh i cant say it theres no worrrdsss

agh well I hope you get what I mean. and also, this is absolutely great so far~! ^w^
Filthy_Casual 12/05/2017 22:59
DankDiddlyMeemz, really? well i didn't intend to plagiarize if that is the case
DankDiddlyMeemz 12/05/2017 20:15
i've seen smth like this somewhere?
ThatGayAnimator 12/05/2017 11:23
great!
Bright_Kondraki 12/05/2017 10:12
r a w
justsombody 12/05/2017 07:30
it's great!