should i colour this?

12/26/2017 17:27
or can someone colour this for me...

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zefuro 01/02/2018 06:10
maiacreates12214, i just did
maiacreates12214 01/01/2018 18:03
zefuro, ;-;
zefuro 12/29/2017 05:19
maiacreates12214, thanks, but no
maiacreates12214 12/28/2017 23:16
zefuro, YOU NEED TO BE A PASSER
RANDOMGIRL4 12/26/2017 20:40
zefuro, Nah, I like it uncolored.
zefuro 12/26/2017 18:40
IToldyouso, should i?
zefuro 12/26/2017 18:28
Sp3ctrum, but these guys had blur for 5 fuucking seconds making pain's face look like a f*cking horse

https://thumbs.gfycat.com/DigitalJubilantConch-size_restricted.gif
IToldyouso 12/26/2017 17:33
Go back to Oldschool
Sp3ctrum 12/26/2017 17:32
MMMMMMMMMm nice
I just want to give some critisism :D

Alright while the blur is a good idea, maybe have less frames for when the blur is there, the blur is supposed to signify speed but when they're being Ilongated then it has no purpose, it just looks weird, I suggest you should've used around 2 frames of the face being blurred and have a jurrastic amount of motion of where the face is so that it does look like a lot of speed is being used.
2nd, have the camera shake a bit more so it gives a sense of impact because the camera is kind of still which makes it look like he was just smashed into a styrefoam wall.
Fluffowuffo 12/26/2017 17:27
Woah, nice!